Editor Needs Journalism Lesson

To the Editors:

Regarding Jessica Rosenberg’s questionable review of the Voices on the Verge show at the Cat:
I helped publicize and hosted the show, so I am, of course, biased. But there are just a few too many glaring omissions, factual discrepancies, and journalistic inadequacies in your review that I had to write to you. So bias or not, here I come.
Last Wednesday, Oberlin was treated to a free concert of a New England based traveling musician’s collective. Called Voices on the Verge, the group is made up of alt. folkie Rose Polenzani, beat poet/jazzwoman/bluesman Erin McKeown, classically sonorous folksinger Beth Amsel, and a-cross-between-dolly-parton-&-aretha-franklin Jess Klein. None of these Voices are really “on the verge.” They’re fully launched and already across the great divide that separates the open-mic-hoepfuls from the Next Big Thing, a fact that is rather obscured by Rosenberg’s review.
To begin with, Rosenberg simply got it all wrong. Maybe she just didn’t really even get it. Rose Polenzani was actually quite the rocking firecracker, wailing and moaning into the night, a far cry from the “earnest vulnerable” ingenue the review painted her to be. Jess Klein (labeled “spacey” by Rosenberg) offered up shrewd lyrics jostling around in twanging country-rock. Beth Amsel, whose palpable gentleness earned her a dismissal as a “self-esteem seeker,” possessed a poetic sensibility and vibrato as lovely as any you’ll ever hear soaring to the Cat’s ceiling. And while “pretentious rockstar” Erin McKeown gave as snazzy a blues-jazz-tin pan alley performance as ever, she’d be the first one to tell you she wasn’t the star of the night. Again, for those who missed it (ahem, Jessica), they’re called Voices on the Verge, not Erin Mckeown and Her Fancy Voices on the Verge Music Machine.
But Rosenberg neglected to arrange even the most cursory 10-minute pre-show interview with any of the Voices or those of us who put the show together; barring that, she also apparently skipped out of the Cat right at the curtain, when, if she’d only stuck around till the crowd left, she could’ve spoken with any of us — musicians, tour manager, booker, publicist — and actually gotten her facts straight. Like, for instance, McKeown’s age (she’s actually 24). Or Klein’s lyrics (um, she doesn’t have a song about love in the trees). Or, say, the current state of Amsel’s esteem (quite fine, thank you).
Erin, Rose, Jess, and Beth may be young, but they’ve got plenty of years of songwriting under their belts and have been nominated for enough awards to prove it. It’s really unfortunate and kind of boggling, then, that Rosenberg chose to capitalize upon only those songs featuring purposefully and deceptively simple lyrics and then level attacks on the women’s lyrical abilities. Judging by this and past reviews Rosenberg has penned, I’m going to assume no one’s ever informed her of this, so I’ll go out on a limb and be the messenger here: Jessica, resorting to sophomoric slurs (“puerile lyric purgatory,” I believe, was the fifty-cent phrase you so proudly cranked out) is not good — or even acceptable — journalism by any stretch of the printing press.
Kudos, however, to Cat Richert, for her roundtable interview with the Voices. Cat’s piece was on-the-mark, owing to the fact that she, unlike Ms. Rosenberg, actually spent 15 paltry minutes to browse their websites, check out the show’s publicity, and get her facts together before sitting down to put her thoughts in print. (And on top of that, she actually knows how to write. Now how often does that happen in the Review?)
So Jessica, here’s some unsolicited advice from this writer. To paraphrase your review’s final words: Journalism is a long, long road, and you’ve just gotten started. Let’s just hope you encounter many readers willing to wait until you get it together. In the meantime, try following Cat’s lead. And take notes. Copious ones.

–Jill Certo
OC ’00

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